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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22883
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;

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IQ-test, an outdating and inaccurate way of assessing the ability of an individual We have long believed in the results of IQ tests. Mentally at least, we believe that the IQ score, representing the intelligence level of an individual, does make a difference. Despite the comments like 'Intelligence is not everything.' or 'Hard work counts.', which are also prevailing worldwide, people still attach much more importance to the IQ test. However, I found that the IQ scores are invalid and unpersuasive after reading the passage. The passage indicates various abilities which people possess. Linguistic and logical-mathematical intelligence, which plays the most important role in IQ tests, appears to be a very tiny part of human intelligence. People have always overestimated the influence of the two mentioned above, and never even notice that the rest is important as equal. The wrong recognition of human intelligence and the seemingly superstitious belief in IQ tests might lead to a devastating result, under which circumstance, it seems that people with linguistic and logical-mathematical are born superior. However, those with other skills can never make the most of of their abilities because they are believed to be less brilliant and even, inferior to the previous ones. Such inequality could bring about the result that hundreds and thousands of people are prevented from making contributions as a consequence of prejudice. We really ought to abolish the IQ test for the sake of human beings. We could devise a new and valid way to assess the real abilities of an individual, otherwise, maybe we can do something easier, just treat everyone equally.

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