英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 高中> 高一英语> 模拟题> 高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22871
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
评语:

作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;

用户练习作文:

Those who have a superficial under of the famous fiction ‘Pride and Prejudice’ tend to regard it as a romantic story. However, after reading the fiction myself, I come to realize that this fiction is much more than a mere romantic story. The popular book, revealing the fickleness of human nature, actually indicates the keys to an agreeable and welcomed figure. The fiction is similar to another fiction ‘Sense and Sensibility’ written by Jane Austen, which tells another story of love and marriage. Notoriously, the two fictions almost share the same plot. Wickham tried to seduce Darcy’s sister while Willoughby did all the same with Colonel Brandon’s niece. Both of them appeared to be so attractive and agreeable that hardly anyone would notice their disgusting and dishonorable past. Simultaneously, innocent yet ignorant girls came to fall in love with this type of insincere and selfish men. However, when the girls realized the truth, the whole beautiful world which they had been imagining collapsed. Marianne was broken-hearted, whose emotional nature added to her misery. Lydia however, refused to admit her failure and still regard Wickham as perfect, but through Austen’s description, we could see her bleak future with her husband. Nevertheless, a deep insight is far from enough. In the two fictions, the protagonists Elinor and Elizabeth possess great sensibility and intelligence, but their life is not always smooth. In the former book, Darcy, who appeared to be pride and distant, disgusted Elizabeth. Elinor in ‘Sense and Sensibility’ encountered another problem. Her beloved man Edward got engaged with secrecy, which makes Elinor frustrated, even desperate. However, at last the two protagonists all got married with the ones who they fell in love with. From my point of view, their happiness resides in their compromise. Elizabeth, for example, gave up her stereotyped opinion of Darcy, which finally made her realized the merits of Darcy and the affection Darcy had for her. In contrast, Elinor was convinced of Edward’s love and never lost her heart. With her patience and love, as well as persistence, Edward eventually realized how silly he was and married Elinor. Apart from the characters mentioned above, we can see all kinds of people with different characteristics, such as the snobbish Fanny Dashwood and Robert Ferras, the agreeable Jane Bannet, etc. With all these typical characters, the stories happened in the isolated Longbourn village actually served as the epitome of the things occurred in a society. The book itself not only tells stories of the romance between the protagonists, but also teaches us a lesson about how to get along with others and the way of becoming agreeable and welcomed in a society. Jane Austen enjoyed such popularity, which resides not only in her affectionate and touching story, but also in her accurate yet delicate description of the society and those who struggle to lead a decent life.

会员评论0个评论)
黑暗圣堂123
金币:44

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.5weilingliu

人气:63发布:2014-06-22

得分:84.5邓小狼

人气:41发布:2013-10-11

得分:83.5nigellee

人气:46发布:2014-05-02

得分:81.0zhuyuanchang

人气:36发布:2013-11-20

得分:80.0fry123

人气:38发布:2015-09-28