小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is a boy.He is very clever. He is good at playing games and swimming and so on.He learns very hardly. Nobody likes him.But he is my best friend.He often helps me with my trouble.He is a hero.When l have trouble he always coming.He often talks about his dream with me.We have the same dream.