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the Benefits of Volunteering Volunteering means that people are willing to help others in need and devote themselves to the society without any complaint.Volunteers are beneficial not only the people in trouble and the society but also themselves . At first,as a social activity,volunteering can help volunteers enrich their social experience.During the work,there are many opportunities to make new friends and try new things.Also,They can learn how to get along well with others from different educational backgrounds.In communicating with different people,they may understand others better and learn to think in other's shoes.It's a good chance to aware their own aweakness and improve it. In addition,volunteering help volunteers improve their ability of working and prepare for job-hunting in the future.When working on the volunteering,volunteers can apply their knowledge gained in the school to the real work.This experience is beneficial to help people know more about their skills and improve the ability to work more efficient. Finally,volunteering help people realize self-worth and gain respect and emblazonment from others. In summary,volunteering has many benefits to not only others but also themselves.It's high time we should devote ourselves to that.
