2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

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First, i am going to travel with my parents, i have never been to Beiing before, so i want to climb the Great Wall, which i think a long time. i will go by plane,this is the first time we take a plane,what a exciting thing. in addition i will call on my sister who lives in zhongshan of Guandong privence. i have two nieces lovely, they are clamorous,the little girl is always cry, i could not bear her.