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China is a fairly big country where has many beautiful cities .Now i am willing introudcing you a city ,hangzhou ,which is my one of my favorite cities. Hangzhou is in northern of zhejiang provicence .It is ofen said that "Up above there is heaven,down bleow there there are Suzhou and Hangzhou."Hangzhou is a famous travel city There are many beautiful intersets valued to visit The most famous landscape is The West lake ,which is famous with a ancient love legend bewteen Xuxian and Baisuzhen ,Except it Leifeng tower,Linyin temper are also good places to visit Hangzhou not only has famous sight spot ,but also has many well-known person ,The ceo of the biggest shopping in china ,Mayun,who is from Hangzhou .the famed writer Yudafu,swimming champion Yeshiwen both of them are bortned in Hangzhou of course what necessary for a travel city that is typical local food .the west lake longjing tea Dongpo`s braised pork Longjing shrimp,which are so decilious that i can not forget the taste since i have a try. when you staff your stomach ,visiting a museum going to an amusement park are also good choice . in a word ,Hangzhou is raally a brilliant city .if you come here ,i will pledge that you will fall in love it.
