文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;
David, who is one of my friend. We knew each other six years ago. He is a strong man with black hair and brown eyes. Because he enjoy sporting, such as running, playing basketball, climbing and so on. I'm very happy since he is a humor boy. He often take the happy to others. It is worth to me to learn.