2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to China!Welcome to Tianjin!Tianjin is beside on the sea of Bohai,and the Haihe river crover the city,so Tianjin have more cutrue of river.Tianhou temple in Tianjin is the only temple on north of China,the people trust she will protect us for life.And Tianjin most famous view is the building of Wudadao,because more countries established area ,so Tianjin have different style building.