2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章用词太过单一，还要注意避免拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；

Welcome to China!Welcome to Tianjin!Tianjin is beside on the sea of Bohai,and the Haihe river go through the city,so Tianjin have more cultrue of river.Tianhou temple in Tianjin is the only temple on north of China, people trust in she will protect us for life.And Tianjin most famous view is the building of Wudadao,because many countries established area in Tianjin ,so Tianjin have buildings of different styles .