2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；

Computer and man With the effort of many outstanding people，computer becomes a part of our life finally. Beause of the computer ,the world becomes a village which is be called global village.People around the world can communicate without the limit of distance and language.It's more possible for the thoughts to collide and produce many exciting ideas.Also，we get a lot of news about many ascepts such as culture ，art ，science and so on ，which we don't have access to know before.what‘s make our more surprise is that all is free and easy to search for. Our lives are really changed by the computers,making frends in the real life is not the only way any more.What's more ,computer relief our hands,which makes our study and work more convient and efficient. However, every con has two sides.Although computer brings many advantages to people,it also has a bad affect on the society.Many children are addicted to computher games so that dilapidated their study ，even some end their lives by themselves finally.And much imformation about force and eroticism encroach on teenagers. So,as far as I'm concerned,computer and man has a tight relationship.