2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用，注意文中个别拼写错误；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；

Computer and man With the effort of many outstanding people，computer becomes a part of our life finally. Beause of the computer,the world becomes a village which is called global village.People around the world can communicate without the limit of distance and language.It's more possible for the thoughts to collide and produce many exciting ideas.Also，we get a large number of news about many aspects such as culture，art，science and so on，which we don't have access to know before.what makes our more surprised is that all is free and easy to search for. Our lives are really changed by the computers,making friends in the real life is not the only way any more.What's more ,computer relief our hands,which urges our study and work more convenient and efficient. However, every con has two sides.Although computer brings many advantages to people,it also has a bad effect on the society.Many children are addicted to computher games so that dilapidated their study ，even some end their lives by themselves finally.Besides， much imformation about force and eroticism encroaches on teenagers. So,as far as I'm concerned,computer and man are connected tightly.