2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；请注意分段。

It is known to us all that playing much computer is not good for human's health but still there is a large growing number of new computer users. So I want to talk about the relationship between human and computer.Many people should use computer to analyse some datum that human's brain can not work out .Some people like use computer to buy goods including many kinds of daily grocerous .The last but not least ,computer has becoming an important entertainment.Now ,even some small children like using Apld to play fashion games like angry birds.But we now computer has radiation, it hurts our eyes and brains,If we sit in front of computers too long ,we may get other healthy problems