小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I meet a new friend on my way to school.her name is Lily,she is from U.S.A. she is fifteen years old.she has a long hair and big eyes,and she is taller than me .I like she very much,because she is very sweet and kind,she told me that she has a twins sister.they look the same.