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Nowadays, tourism are becoming more and more popular in china. people begin to think that weather it will lead to harm to our environment. Personally i think, it is difficult to avoid the pollution. above all, the visitors are always throwing rubbish everywhere ignoring the moral, even they know that what they have done are harmful to the environment, some of them don't care about it. what's more, most people like to pay a visit to the beaufiful place, so this triggers people's intersts to develop more natural reserves. pollution is inevitable when people make them to be the tourism resorts. last but not least, people develop just for money, they don't spend to much money on management, this is another reason for the pollution . toally, i think it will do harm to our envirenment. there is a long way fpr us to pretect our environment and to reasonablly develop our tourism.
