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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment With time going by,the tourism becomes more and more popular in China.It is obvious that it creates enormous economic benefits to nation,however,the overexploited tourism brings much threat and risks to the earth. It has a bad effect on the environment in many aspects.First, a lot of people going to famous attractions on every golden vacation,they often bring large numbers of rubbish to the scenic spots,which means a great potential threat to the environment and makes pollution.In addition,in order to attract much more tourists and increase financial income,many local governments create artificial attractions or improve equipment by destroying the natural environment.This action causes the pollution of environment,decreasing habitats of animals. In summary,overmuch tourism leads to many environmental problems.It is our duty to protect the environment and avoid environmental disasters.So it is high time we should control the tourism development and balance the relationship of tourism and environment.
