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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(78):How Do We Keep Healthy

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:11浏览次数:610
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目前,甲型流感(H1N1)在世界范围内传播很迅速,人们也很恐慌、害怕,根据下面的提示,以How Do We Keep Healthy为题,写一篇短文。’(80词左右)
参考词汇:wash hands,open the windows,keep clean,public places.healthy food,do more exercise,enough sleep,keep happy,had better see the doctor

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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;

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How Do We Keep Healthy Now, H1N1 comes quickly all over the world. People are worried and scared. I think a good habit is important. We should often wash our hands and open the windows. We should also keep our rooms clean. We shouldn’t go to public places. We'd better eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruits and so on. And we should do more exercise, such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. We also need enough sleep. It’s really important to keep happy. If we don’t feel well, we'd better see the doctor. If we do these we will have healthy bodies. 解析: 要围绕主题将日常人们应该注意的细节表达清楚。

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