2015年高考作文优秀范文：中国结

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；

　　Dear Tom, 　　How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you.