能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;
This report aims to make recommendations based on the findings from the focus groups which tested two possible flavours. To start with,the graphs below shows clearly that 73% of responses to the cherry flavour were very positive.In addition,approximately two-thirds expressed that they don’t like the strawberry flavour ,mightily on account of the flavour-dependent and sweet taste.Finally,with regard to the 11% medium preference,it can be concluded that great majority of people preferred the diet cherry version,which are about three times as many as the diet strawberry version. Therefore,according to these findings,it could be recommended that the company launches two types of cherry flavour drink which contain normal and diet versions.However,I wouldn’t suggest a normal strawberry version,the company could consider producing a diet which was clearly more popular.