小学三年级英语作文:My school

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my school hello! everyone,my name is jiehanyue.today,I am going to introduce you to my school. my primary school is a very beautiful school,it's name's the third primary school from Liantang.Where beautiful scenery, surrounded by trees is a park.so Students in our school all like it. now,I already graduated.but I will remember it forever.