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I do think that human activities have significantly badly affected on environment.For instance ,the rapid development of express industrious have negative effect to the plants because of nurmerous plastic things.Because the difficult decompse of plastic,some toxic elements will penetrate into soil and cause the plants unhealthy.It is also destroy the animals digestion systerm if they have ate some toxic foods. Some people think that it is too late to take measures to sovlethese serious problems.From substantial newspaper and media have reported that the speed of tropical rainforests disapper are astounding. And some downside news about animal spcies eliminishing are easily affordable from the internent.Therefore,it is not surprised that these people hold negative view.While other people have opposity opinion,they believe that only if take effective measures can we improve this situantion.Actually, the advanced technology can help our a lot. For example, planting trees can control the speed of farm lands bacoming disert.And we can utilize technology to filter toxic elements and reduce the sewage dumped to keep our river clean. Form my own prospective,i think effictive measures are trusworthy.Now ,people are awareness of the result of environmental degradation,so,it would not hard for smart human use their intelligance to address the concern perfectly.
