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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9756
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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I do think that human activities have significantly badly affected on environment.For instance ,a boom development of express industrious has a negative effect on the plants because of numerous plastic things.Because the difficult decompose of plastic,some toxic elements will penetrate into soil and cause the plants unhealth.It will also destroy the animals digestion system if they have eaten some toxic foods. Some people think that it is too late to take measures to solve these serious problems.From substantial newspaper and media have reported that the speed of tropical rainforests disappeared is astounding. Some downside news about animal species eliminating is easily affordable from the internet.Therefore,it is not astonishing that these people hold the negative view.While other people have oppositive opinion,they believe that only if take effective measures can we improve this situation.Actually, the advanced technology can improve the relationship of human and environment. For example, planting trees can control the speed of farm lands becoming desert. We can impactful utilize technology to filter toxic elements out and reduce the sewage dumped to keep our rivers clean. Form my own prospective,I think effective measures are trustworthy.Now ,people are conscious of the result of environmental degradation,it would not hard for smart human use their intelligence to address the concern perfectly.

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