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新东方托福高分作文:为什么要上大学?

发布时间:2013-07-10 16:43浏览次数:709
要求:
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者在句法层面做的很棒;

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The Value of University Life University life is unforgettable for a period of time to students.During the time,not only is the value of university life to introduce students new knowledge,but also forces them to become more independent thinkers. University life opens up a new world for students,providing excellent literature diverse reginal culture,to encourage them to be independent thinkers.From the literature,students could have access to some fresh idea of independent thinking,which make them be introduced to new ways of life and new ways of interpreting life.Unquestionably,it has a great deal of significance for students to be independent thinkers.As they so do,they experiencing a new understanding of the world and of himself,do believe thinking for themselves being vital,from diverse reginal culture of university.As students meet and interact with people of other reginal culture in university,they are becoming aware not only of other groups in their own culture but also of them.Because of their familarity,they are swayed by no prejudices. From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably arrived at the conclusion that university is a good place to receive knowledge,what's more,to be independent thinkers is the value of university life.

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