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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇，但请注意单词拼写的检查；文章层次较为清晰；
A boom development of economy have not bring satisfaction to citizens.Nowadays,we can possess good quality necessries and healthy food sources,however,most people's life quality in large cities are decreasing. In my own opinion,I think that there are at lest three reasons behind this phnomenon. The first one is the environmental degradation.The deterioration of atmosphere is detrimental to our body health.In the recent years, fog and haze threat our life. Hospitals' halls are crowded with patients,especially young children and elders.On the other hand ,beacuse of the high income taxes, high income earners will not to motivate theirselves to get greater progress in the career.As all we know,it is not astonishment that heirarchy leave massive work for their employee in order to have satisfacted benenfits . It is necessary for us to gain a comprehensive understanding that we should relax ourselves.We should prohibite scarifice people's body just for the short-term operation for companies.We are conscious that green technology and flexible sports lead us a fancy life.
