2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；

A boom development of economy has not given satisfaction to citizens.Nowadays,good quality necessities and healthy food sources are easily afforded,however,those people who live in modern cities have unsatisfaction life quality. In my own opinion,I think that there are at lest three causes behind this phenomenon.The first one is the environmental degradation.The deterioration of atmosphere is detrimental to our body health.In the recent years, fog and haze threat our life. Hospitals' halls are crowded with patients,especially young children and elders.On the other hand ,because of the high income taxes, high income earners are not willing to motivate themselves to get greater progress in the career.As all we know,it is not astonishment that hierarchy leaves massive work for their employee in order to have numerous benefits . It is necessary for us to gain a comprehensive understanding that we should relax ourselves.If companies sacrifice people's body just for the short-term operation, we should prohibit the immoral behavior .We are conscious that green technology and flexible sports lead us a fancy life.