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As we all know, China has many famous and interesting landscapes. They are the great spot s to show to my foreign friend. If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, I will take him to The Great Wall. In my opinion, The Great Wall is ours honour. It is on behalf of our national intellectuality and power. Besides, undoubtedly, The Great Wall is very wonderful and impressive. I think my foreign friend will have a unforgerttable impression after visiting the The Great Wall. Of course, there are others scenes in The Great Wall. For example, the old bricks, which has the long history and the age meaning.
