托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；

Nowadays there is a growing concern over living in a rural area or living around a lot of people.Opinions the topic vary widely from person to person.From my standpoint,living in a rural area is my preference compared living in with cities. First of all, all life seemed to live in harmony with its surroundings in countryside.In spring,white clouds of bloom drift above the green field.In autumn,oak and maple and birch set up a blaze of colors that flame and flicker across a background of pines.Then foxes barked in the hills and deer sliently crossed the fields.Along the roads,laural,great ferns and wildflowers delight the taveler's eye through much of the year. Second,the relationships between neighbours and strangers are more friendly and closer than those in the town.People are fairly familiar with others,even their brothers and sisters .There is no doubt that they will greet each other warmly as long as they run into.What's more,warm-hearted as the people living in village,they share delicious food and help one another even that they haven't meeted before. By contrast,the environment of cities has been heavily contaminated by effluent, toxic gas and othe waste materials.It is no accident that blue sky and white clouds are rarely seen,replaced of considerable modern huge buildings and boundless fog and haze.Otherwise,there seems to be a invisible obstacle between people.Isolated with other people,they may have no understanding of people around them and consider it universal. Therefore,it is essential that effective measures be taken to live in a rural area with the original nature and pure human relationships.