单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a new black shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.