小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I've got a lovely dog,his name is dudu.He come my home when he was only one-year-old,our family all like it very much.Dudu likes some kinds of food,so he becomes more and more fatter and now I must control its meals.Although it has already been nine years old,but I still need to take him to do some exercises,so we always go out for a walk with dudu now.It's very important to him to keep body health.Dog's life is more less than people,I hope he is very happy when he stays with us,Dudu is one of the best friend of mine,I don't want to leave him.