小学一年级英语作文:My dog

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；

I've got a lovely dog and his name is dudu.He came my home when he was only one-year-old,our family all like it very much.Dudu likes some kinds of food,so he becomes more and more fatter and now I must control its meals.It has already been nine years old,but I still need to take him to do some exercises,so we always go out for a walk with dudu now.It's very important to him to keep body health.Dog's life is less than people,I hope he is very happy when he stays with us,Dudu is one of my best friend,I don't want to leave him.