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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2258
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨。

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Due to the shortage of budget in many countries, especially developing countries, the development and the creation of art is always neglected by government, for the officials believe that those practical things and social insurance on medical and transport are much more important than art. Hence little attention has been paid on the realm of art. However, what the government ignored is that with the economy developing in such a fast speed, physical life of citizens has reached a satisfactory level, so their requirement for art enjoyment increases. Therefore, taxpayers’ money should be spent more on supporting artists and activities in art realm, aiming to create more opportunities for inhabitants to intoxicate in the world of art and increase the artistic interest inside. The advanced modern technology and copious social services, we cannot deny, can surely improve people’s quality of life. Education brings more literacy to our society; science enables us to live more convenient and relaxed; insurance on medical insures everyone in the society to get equal superior medical care when needed; the establishment of subway lines and other form of transport satisfies people’s going-out demand. All these services rely on the supporting from the government. However, it is only the physical requirement that could be satisfied. And now, people ask for more entertainment and enjoyment of art, in other words, spiritual things, which lead them to a higher level of life. Now it is the time for government to emphasis art development. And the most efficient thing they can do is to increase the budget to support those artists and artistic work. Why? Several reasons are here to support. First of all, from the perspective of human’s requirements, we can say everyone has requirements on different aspects; each aspect is equally important but follows a simple sequence. Satisfactory on physics is the first step, once this is done, art would be needed. Art is the way of expressing emotion and thoughts, the form of art existed since ancient society. Inactivation of art can contribute to the ossified thinking and the sluggish development of economy. High-leveled civil society is always existing with the booming culture and art. Secondly, art and culture have the feature of territoriality, so they surely become the symbol of a country and the bond of unity. Last but not least, art provide people different perspectives of seeing this whole world, which make people understand our world all-sided and arouse people’s ability of creation and innovation. In a word, our society need fundamental services as well as artistic services. Government should invest to support both of these two parts of life, with which way could create a healthy and vigorous society.

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