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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写，高级词汇的希望能更熟练一些
Save money Nowadays,more and more people who is at work seek fashion and purchase expensive items,like clothes,shoes and so on.For that,many of them often can't offer their lives on they own.Therefor,I very agree that saving money may make us smart consumers. I approve the opinion,with good reasons.First,if we know how to asign money ,we will save much money,which possibly make a difference on our future life.Second,to some extent,saving money is benefical to releasing family burden. In a world,it is helpful to us for saving money.
