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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；
Save money Nowadays,more and more people who are at work seek for fashion and purchase expensive items,like clothes,shoes and so on.For that,many of them often can't offer their lives on they own.Therefore,I am for that saving money may make us smart consumers. I suppose the opinion,with good reasons.First,if we know how to spend money,we will save much money,which possibly makes a difference on our future life.Second,to some extent,saving money is beneficial to releasing family burden. In a word,it is helpful to us for saving money.
