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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12882
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;

用户练习作文:

It is vividly portrayed in the cartoon that the boy's parents talk to him through online communication instead of face-to-face talking,which is of great concern.Absolutely,online communication plays a negative role in daily communication. First of all,though online communication provides us much convenience,to a large extent,it is not the true feeling on our mind.Furthermore,communicating through Internet frequently can separate us from our family,therefor,its deficiency outweigh the advantage.Moreover,electronic communication can never substitute face-to-face contact as the later is sentient. From what have been discussed above,we can reach the conclusion that electronic communication will never replace face-to-face contact.

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