作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;从句不足,简单句比重高;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Hi Mary, This is Liming,I will go to Beijing tomorrow,so can't discuss the thing of holding a party. Could you advise me the final time and place that you decide?ALso please kindly advise me what should I prepare for the party. It will be much appreciated if you can help me. Thanks in advance and best regards, Liming