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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；加强长句的练习，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。
Hi Sir, Nice to meet you here. This is Hubin,I am going to NewYork to attend the fair within Dec 15 to Dec 22.I am very interested in your company's new product,which product number is 5670.Could you kindly send me your price list and instruction? Thanks for your cooperate,hope we can establish long-term business relationship. Best regards, Hubin
