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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
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文章衔接手法恰当;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

My mother once told me:never judge one person just by appearance.I thought it is not sure when i was young. I had a perience about judge someone and it could not forgot all my life.I met a beautiful girl who has big and bright eyes at my 13 years old,and I thought we would be good friends forever.But,the fact is contrary,she lied me and talked my bad things with other classments.I was too angry to lose my contrl and quarreled with her. We broken down and i thought that would be come just soon or later.After that I believed it is unwise to judge a person just by their appearance

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