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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11494
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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文章层次较为清晰;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

There is a traditional saying like this: reading is an original source in all fields. i absolutely agree this idea. Human beings have knowledges from reading and then apply those knowledges into their practices, which are reasonable and intelligent. During the practice, people can use knowledges which from reading to solve many problems simple or complicatedly. We experience much situations happened in our daily lives. We can manipulate them into our lives to observe and digest our surroundings. Meanwhile, observation closly really help us to open our horizens. Using compare and contrast learning by doing made us learn knowledges deeper and more comprehensivly. however, it is based on the preparation that we have learned some basic informations, and those informations we learned much more from reading. in that case, reading is much more essential for people to observe our surroundings. At the same time, there are some limitations in our daily lives, time or money, for example. absolutely, reading is the most convenient and effective way for people to open their horizens and improve their personal qualities. In modern society, the class structure is less rigid, people can be perserved more opportunities to study. i believe that it is our duty to improve our social and literal positions.

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