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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1455
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

The mobile phone is regarded as one of the greatest inventions of the world,which brings convenience to people's life.Some prophets even believe that traditional letter writing will have to give away to more advanced and efficient communications-equipment.Personally,telephone won't kill the letter writing in people's daily communication. On the one hand,letter writing conveys more sincere and thoughtful information than phone.Everybody knows that letter writing can help people express their idea in the exact way,without the careless language error.Of course,the more formal situation,the more important it is to use letter writing.If you are an undergraduate,you will prepare for your thesis using letter writing .Therefore,letters are the preferred way of communication when it comes to formal occasion. On the other hand,letter writing is unique.We can have access to the evolution of traditional culture,appreciating the beauty of word.The development of word has witnessed the evolution of human beings' intelligence.Whereas,using more phone will urge us to forget the calligraph.With the popularization of the phone,we should focus on letter writing,rather than be blind to the dying out of this traditional skill. Taking all into account,letter writing exerts good effects on people's daily communication.Combining phone and letter writing will enrich people's life.

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