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The wildlife in the nature is threatened by the behave of our human beings. Lands are becoming to deserts, animals are disappearing from our planet. what measurements should we take? Some people think that there is noting we can do in the late time. Such statement is so ridiculous that it should be absurd that we have this ideas in our mind. We live in the earth and have a tight relationship with the surrounding environment. In another word, we have no other place to inhabit except the current place. whatever, we need to take actions right right to solve the problem between the environment and us. As the development of technology and no laws and regulations protect the condition of the nature, it is now becoming more and more seriously. All has a negative influence about us. For the physical factors, bad weather condition will cause hardly breathing, bring with more illness. Furthermore, Humans will suffer more stresses, and eventually induce depression what will badly affect our normal live. Now the actions should be take immediately. We should keep the biological diversity, we need a sustainable development. Firstly, it is a global question, so the whole countries should join together to tackle this issues. Secondly, for each government, we should raise the public awareness of preservation and educate the civil to protect the environment.
