文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is love. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.