增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a neight too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.