正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a dog. My dog's name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years old. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. It has brown fur. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?