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Our school coming a new teacher.he is my math-teacher in our class.He has big eyes and he like smiles.he looks very sunshine.So we call he sun-teacher.he wear black T-thirt Every day.Sometime we eat lunch with him.he often eat fish and beef. And at the lesson.He like speak jion to us.We like his lesson very much.