高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

I am very glad to here that you will come to China and spend your holiday in China. Now I will tell you something about the things to do on the Mid-Autumn festival.It is something important for Chinese people and has a long history.It is a special occasion for people to get together and having dinner.For the most part,we eat moon cakes after having dinner.What is more,we watch the moon together.The moon is said to be the biggest and the brightest on that day. I wish you will have a good time when you come.