2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

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Is It Wise to Make Friends Oline? To tell the truth,with the swift development of society,making friends are becoming more and more easy in the world with the help of Internet.However,I am not in favor of msking friends online.There are a few reasons as follows. To begin with,making friends online is dangerous.Due to the fact that people online do not know of each other,it is difficult to recognize information online true or false,which is offered by online friends.It is universally acknowledged that cheating online is a common phenomenon. What's more,making friends online is also wasting time.To be honest,if we make fiends online,we will check our message more frequently to insure there is no negelects from our online friends.If some of them do not have a strong self-controlled,they may get accustomed to this behavior.As a result,it may lead to get separated from our real friends. In conclusion,I hold the view that it is inadvisable to make friends online.Not only can it waste our time and energy,but also it bring some bad influence to us.