2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Be Careful With Our Money Different colleges have different value of spending money. Some students may think that we should spend all of our money to enjoy the beautiful life. Others believe that we should save our money to live in a simple life. In my opinion, as a college student, we should learn how to be careful with our money and may it possible to save some unnecessary money. We all know that we don't have ability to earn living by oursevles, all the expense were paid by our parents who work hard day and night just want to make us live in the comfortable environment. I can't accept we use the parent's money to entertain ourselves, and they give up improving the better life style. It's unfair as well as ashamable. All of us are being adult, we have capability to know how to manage our money to make it use in the valueable way. At the same time, we can learn how to save our money in daily life. Such as collecting all kinds of coupons, looking for group-buy deal if we eat out or travel. Don't wrinkle you nose by doing all small things. If you insist on saving, you will save a big deal. Furthermore, if we cost our money careless, you just buy what you like or eat something what you want to taste, ignoring the price, you will lost all of your money, worsely ,you may borrow some money from you friends and dommates, by the end of the expire date you don't have money to return, it like a awful cynical, finally, everyone will keep away from you and you become a liar who usually broken his promise. It not only become your trouble, but also make a big burdence for you family. In a word, we don't have conditions to live in a extravagance, if we have, we can't do that either. We should be careful with our money to manage it in a useful way.