小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Our school coming a new teacher.he is my math-teacher in our class.He has big eyes and he likes smiles.He looks very sunshine.So we call he sun-teacher.he wear black T-thirt Every day.Sometime we eat lunch with him.He often eats fish and beef. And at the lesson.He usually take jion to us.We like his lesson very much.