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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33570
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。

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Be Careful With Our Money Different colleges have different values of spending money. Some students may think that we should spend all of our money to enjoy the beautiful life. Others believe that we should save our money to live in a simple life. In my opinion, as a college student, we should learn how to be careful with our money and may it possible to save unnecessary money. We all know that we don't have ability to earn living by oursevles, all the expense were paid by our parents who work hard around the clock just want to make us live in the comfortable environment. I can't accept we use the parent's money to entertain ourselves, and they give up improving their life style. It's unfair. All of us are being adult, we have capability to know how to manage our money to make it use in the valuable way. At the same time, we can learn how to save our money in daily life. Such as collecting a great variety of coupons, looking for group-buy deal if we eat out or travel. Don't wrinkle your nose by doing all small things. If you insist on saving, you will save a big deal. Furthermore, if we cost our money careless, you just buy what you like or eat something what you want to taste, ignoring the price, you will waste all of your money, worsely, you may borrow some money from you friends and roommates, by the end of the expire date you don't have money to return, it like an awful cynical, finally, everyone will keep away from you and you become a liar who usually broken his promise. It not only become your trouble, but also make a big burden for your family. In a word, we don't have conditions to live in an extravagance, if we have, we can't do that either. We should be careful with our money to manage it in a useful way.

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