2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵。

People have been building reading habits for a long period Considering this phenomena the government give financial supports to establish free public libraries so libraries are seen not only in schools but also in towns nowadays Is that a valuable investment The government would exactly give a positive answer Libraries are somehow symbols to represent public culture in towns For citizens it is a quite good place where they can acquire more knowledges and informations People can spend their spare time to stay at libraries for what they want to learn or what happen currently The development of people s degree of culture will bring developments to society economy and culture it is absolutely a long period goal The citizens will certainly be glad to join the public library club or the activities it hold for free if there are some ones The government could benefit from the establishment of libraries since it can enrich people s life and foster the interpersonal communication among people In addition the function of the free libraries in each town still have to be mentioned is that it offers a good chance to build a harmonious society However there are some people hold the converse opinions They believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information Moreover it is more convenient for people to surf on the Internet as there are countless websites for them to scan In my point of view the public free libraries deserve the financial support from the government It really do good to people s culture life and the development of the society However the money are supposed to invest in the valuable fields instead of some non function parts