邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

How to improve school safety People all over the country are greatly shocked by recent accidents of school violence.These tragedies show that much more attention must be paid to school safety,and these accidents make us to think about how to make school a safer place for the children. I think we should take some measures to improve school safety.First of all,no one is allowed to come into school without permission and no one is permitted to take knife and such things in school. Secondly,the school security guard should walk around the campus more frequently,so that these people who want to commit crime will be frighten away. Finally,andmost important,the school must give children the school safety education and raise their awareness of self-protection. Everyone of us must take actions to prevent school violence crime.